For Assignment 1, I have to design an A3 size poster for a play titled Dreams.
Theme of the play: Surrealistic experimental play about lost opportunities and dreams of a young Singaporean. It is a story about a person who sacrificed his/her life for someone else's future. The tone of the play is dark comedy.
I am supposed to develop my own story for this play.
These are my thumbnail sketches of my concept.
This is the the final product that I developed from one of my sketches.

Comments from the class are:
Theme of the play: Surrealistic experimental play about lost opportunities and dreams of a young Singaporean. It is a story about a person who sacrificed his/her life for someone else's future. The tone of the play is dark comedy.
I am supposed to develop my own story for this play.
These are my thumbnail sketches of my concept.
This is the the final product that I developed from one of my sketches.

Comments from the class are:
- The big black stripe at the top is too chunky and awkward
- The male figure is not that clear
- Alignment of the words at the bottom can be changed
Possible improvements suggested by the class are:
- The black stripe can be replaced with more details of the play
- I should draw a more prominent male figure to clearly indicate the figure is a male
- The words at the bottom can be aligned to the right.
I would be posting the improved version of the poster soon. In the meantime, if you have any suggestions on how I can improve my poster, please feel free to comment. Thank you.
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